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RY X
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/21/26 04:03 PM
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Joined: Aug 2007
Posts: 7,150 Likes: 87
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The movement and the melody here captivated me. I listened more intently than I usually listen to things.
I think it's a really compelling "groove."
My suggestion;
The lyrical subject matter is very intense. I'd rewrite this (maybe about something else altogether)...and back it down some with regard to content and message.
Feel free to ignore my opinion...but understand that I really like what you've done.
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