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TV Drama
by Raymond Byabazaire - 08/31/26 09:46 AM
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I agree with all the positive comments above regarding the performance and the lyric and would add that there is a real sincerity that comes across both in the lyric itself and your voice, which I found very moving.
I also agree with JAPOV about it seeming like two songs. I would leave out the "Who I am" question altogether. It doesn't belong in my opinion. I also agree with Calcoic that you did a great job of building suspense musically leaving me wanting to hear you really belt out a chorus.
Really good. You are clearly a talented guy.
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