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TV Drama
by Raymond Byabazaire - 10/15/26 04:35 AM
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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/15/26 02:10 AM
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Lau Noah
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/13/26 02:43 PM
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ILLIT
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/13/26 11:28 AM
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Joined: Jan 2011
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Beautiful song. Very genuine in lyrics and delivery.
I think you have an opportunity to add to the emotional delivery in a few places. Your melodies are very good but become a little stagnant to me at the end of each verse. It would be a great place to go up in vocal pitch even if it's just on the last couple words imo. Would make great lead ins to each verse and also the chorus.
That's all I can really pick out as something I would consider changing.
Very nice song!
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