Originally Posted by lane1777
I have to agree with others here, your voice is very good, and stands out.. carries every word you sing, people listen to that, I don`t think you have to be repetitive on any lyric you have here, your making your point and people are getting it.
really a good listen I like the song.. [ just my thoughts] Lane


Thanks. Lane, for the listen. I see your point about repeating the line. I'll give it some thought.

Steven


Creators of music have a responsibility to their craft. When they have finished using all the notes and words, they must pass them down to the next generation with a simple request. “Use these to create new music.”...Steven McDonald