Marty,
I'm glad you like this version because I've used up all my credits for today. Btw, this was the very first version Suno came up with. When I read your lines I thought, oh man, this is not going to work. I'm absolutely fascinated what these AI tools can do. The song is great. Very well-written. The story is awesome. The female voice is a perfect fit ... I think.
If you PM me your email address I can send you the MP3 and show you the metatags I used and the prompts.

All the best - Robert