Originally Posted by Fdemetrio
It's not structured well. The melody is monotonous, on both versions of it.

It's not just about sound it's about having a good song.

And not about pressing buttons.

The sweat and fire you put into writing , us what gives the music it's character.

Same melodic verse all the way through, that's why it stagnates

I know all of that. But I only get a few credits from SUNO each day and for now I will spend them on this song.

This thread is my personal AI song lab.
I'm not going to sweat the details until it is something that I can use or it is getting into good enough shape to head for the finish line.
I also want to become more familiar with prompting SUNO. (the actual song creator) This song is day one of that process.

On my favorite version here, I like the vocal tone and the jump to the chorus. For present purposes, that is good enough progress.

(the machine decided what would be the chorus. My metatag called for the chorus to be elsewhere. The machine turned my designated verse into a chorus. I liked the machine's call better than mine...scary implications)

https://soundcloud.com/sunset-poet-of-texas