BRILLIANT!!! Simply brilliant, you two! What a great pairing of minds on this one. There's so many great lines, it's tough to pick a favorite.. among them are:

Sometimes it seems the longing
Is more than I can bear
But the sweet sound of your voice
Keeps me going till I'm there

But my very favorite is:

So the moment lasts forever
When I'm finally where you are

Unfortunately, that's going to segue to my only nit, but it's fairly substantial. IMO, I would end the chorus there. Adding those next two lines sorta... I dunno, "cheapen" the beauty, simplicity, and power of the chorus. Again, that's JMO, but that's how I see it.

Again, this is truly great... my final comment... I want more, you guys make a great writing team!

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p.s. hope we'll see ya in L.A., Michael.
p.s.s. here's a suggestion for the bridge

(bridge)
Every town that slips on by
Brings me closer to your side
I hate this long drive alone
But, until your touch brings me home


[This message has been edited by TINK (edited 02-04-2003).]

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