There are two sure fire ways for a newbie to break into this or any writing forum, the formula is quite simple, all they need do, is 1), breeze through ten posts and quickly say, I love this, great rhythm, this lyric sings without thinking, etc, etc, and 2) in the title of their post say ("Needs Help") then preface the lyric with, not sure about the chorus, bridge is incomplete, fresh ink, please critique, etc, etc, and other posters will be in their glory trying to help...see it's really easy...!

[This message has been edited by sweetjoyce (edited 11-23-2006).]

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