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Bobbie, this really had me going for a long time...however, it was confusing to me when you started in saying "I need some attention" because it felt like the speaker in the song was needing some attention. It would seem like you should say YOU need some attention, etc. or at least set it up that the speaker isn't speaking. Very cool lyric, though, and I agree it could have commercial appeal. Maybe some more hints along the way that it's a cat to keep people from thinking how immoral you are! ha!
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