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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Hi Moker...like this one..definately got potential...i like the "even the candles cried" in the restaurant, and in the church..
very nice imagery...makes it a nice story...i feel melody wise it is walking a straight road,if you get my drift...now only my opinion,but i dont think you need the bridge...i listened to this cut 3 times....the bridge could be a nice weeping guitar solo...then a say half note key change taking you back into the "hook"..to finish the song...i know it is a pretty basic production,but it has great potential with a full production..and a few tweaks here and there lyric and music wise..i wish you well,enjoyed the listen,thanks for sticking this one up,...Good Luck..Terry Moore
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