Thank you very much again linda :-), I'm not big on grammer but lie and lay work about the same as far as their sounds, so I'll switch that. As far as the effects go, I'll make an attempt to take them off... it just doesn't sound like the voice in my head does, but I'll give it a try... who knows :-)

Long story, I got kicked out of my place... so it might be a while until I'll have a chance to change things around as I'm living in my car right now... LOL :-)

Have a great day and thanks for you're help.

Is it wierd having the third verse a repeat of the first two, but all strung together?