By last part, did you mean the bridge? And by lyrically not needing it, did you mean that it doesn't really add anything to it? should I change it to something else that develops what's going on a little more? or is it just redundant, sounds fine, and can stay.

Funny note: I have been trying to get divorced for a while, and I have a tattoo of her name on my wrist(yeah I know so don't tell me)(she has my name on her wrist also so at least it is even) and a misquito bit me there. So now not only do I have this stupid tattoo, but it itches!!! DAMN YOU FATE :-)

Thanks for your time listening to the song, this is so much more helpful when I can work this stuff out now, before I'm just plain sick of the song! thanks again.