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TV Drama
by Raymond Byabazaire - 08/31/26 09:46 AM
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by Gary E. Andrews - 08/27/26 11:50 PM
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Ken......Kinda new to this board, and just found this. Nice, good feeling lyrics. I see you have cut back on the length, with some expert help. It flows well and is fun and easy to read. IMO it is still a bit word-y and still reads more like poetry to me. Beautiful poetry. A lyric like this, if sung, would need to be sung at a slow and possibly, dreamy pace. This would make it even longer. As I said, JMO. and I ain't nobody, in this business.
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