I think you've only got half your chorus. The two 'love was on the line' lines will probably repeat so that leaves the other two to really sum up, say something cogent and to the point, re-emphasizing the title/hook meaning(s) and leading to the final giving of the hook. Those two lines are strategically important. Four hits on the hook per chorus would be strong.

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