Hi Johnnie,I read through your song a couple of times,and i will only post on songs i like.I put my own melody just to hear the flow and there were a couple of problems but over all good idea and good words.These are a few ideas to make it more singable if thats even a word.

I used to sit and watch for your name appear
every night as i looked at the screen
I couldn't wait to send you a note
And see yours come right back to me


Its amazing how so much emotion
can be passed through these tiny lines
but as we shared are dreams together
you brought back a spark to my life
I think i was falling in love
long before you showed up at my door
and when i looked in to your blue eyes
my heart melted down to its core



could this online romance have a chance.


Ok that heart melted line is very cheesy and old,but i was just trying to cut a few words down to give it a better flow musicly, i hope it helps.

All the best Anne.