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Hi, I'm new here and getting very frustrated because I can't do my own music. I've tried-I did two songs and they are okay, but need help. Thought I'd put some new lyrics on here and see what you all think. Thanks, Johnnie
LOVE WAS ON THE LINE Johnnie McInnis Copyright 8/5/04
I used to sit and watch for your name to appear Every night on my computer screen. I couldn’t wait to send a note to you, Then you’d send one right back to me. We’d sit there alone for hours, Just talkin’ ‘bout your kids and mine. You’d ask me how things were going. I’d say, “Well, I guess that my day was alright.”
Then one day we realized We had become more than just friends.
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And suddenly, love was on the line. My heart skipped a beat in time. We had come so far and we couldn’t turn back Because love was on the line.
It’s amazing how so much emotion Can be passed through these tiny lines. But as we shared our hope and our dreams together You brought back a spark to my life. I think I was falling in love Long before you showed up at my door. But when I looked into those blue eyes I was so scared you wouldn’t want me anymore.
I didn’t know if I was what you expected. Could this long-distance romance have a chance?
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Bridge:
Our hearts had made a connection I’m praying that nothing will break. No one will understand how it could happen, But I’m hopin’ it was worth the wait.
Chorus:
a.k.a. Ladynred
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Mrs.Johnnie McInnis
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11/16/07 05:36 PM
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Sam Wilson
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