Moker,

This is real nice. Not much to suggest, these are all small things:

Maybe change the child to a boy. That makes it a bit more clear on the casual listen that the "her" on the last chorus is the mom, and not the daughter again. I can see, however, wanting to keep it an all-girls theme.

Wasn't familiar with toe-head - perhaps just "daughter" or "son" would suffice.

The word "that" at the end of "Well I never understood that" seemed unnecessary and stood out as harsh/flat. You might want to cut it.

..ant


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