Hi B....purple is pretty smile So you think this works...but like me...can see where G.J.'s thoughts are valid...and would work that way too....following on your suggestion too.

I think I addressed John's thoughts with this revision...(i hope)...and the one that G.J. and I mentioned and reading your suggestion..about the touching...well see...I want Charlotte to be a foster Mom...in the future..and I think the song is suggesting that too.

Being so much of the fence row songs and stories are fiction...
(hope you're sitting down...in case that statement startled you too much wink We have the families taking trips down south to the bayou, having meetings, weddings, picking berries, baking pies, etc etc etc..... I'm hoping it's not too far fetched...that Charlotte could be a Foster Mom to all kinds of babies. By rights, Pearla Possum shouldn't be conducting her business in the day time ....ya know? ..yet our songs...suggest she is...

so....I'm arguing with myself...on this too ...and my mind isn't closed wink ...so am very open for thoughts and am still thinking.

Thanks Wy... very much!!
big hugs,
Kaley

Miss Willow's Fence Row, and...Andy & Friends CD
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