Originally Posted by nightengale
Thanks You'all, I'll be trying to condense it a little later. Still trying to learn how really, and still say what I'm trying to say. Been doing alot of reading, "I'm" a work in progress.


'Still a work in progress'...aren't we all...I know it is hard to condense the words when they all mean so much to you...but I can see where you can shed a few and not lose any meaning (like TampaStan's suggestions) If I gave you my suggestions I would probably screw up the meter...LOL! (MY BIG ISSUE) So, I will spare you that but I do think you have a real good one here...keep plugging away at it. vicki


Open to co-writers and collaborations with other lyricists and/or musicians.