Geneva,
I think you needn't worry about it at this point. Stick with the original bridge and when it comes to music the composer will be able to discuss altering the tiny bits that need adjustment.

It's the prettiest picture I've seen painted with words in some time.

Did I mention what a brilliant choice of structure you chose for this? AABA fits perfectly the tone perfectly.

Have fun,
John


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