Beachnut,

I think Mary Chapin Carpenter or someone with her style could

do incredible justic to a song like this also.

Rewriting will totally change the way it sings to me,

and change what artists style fits it.

I guess it's a matter of what the majority likes if I

ever want to learn to write commercial. I call myself

novice but have gotten so into writing over the last

few months that I really want to learn.

Thanks for reading and I value your opinion.

Geneva

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GENEVA Griffin

Lyrics seeking singer/composer,cowriters,collaborators