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Afro Pop
by Raymond Byabazaire - 10/01/26 12:39 PM
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Afro Pop
by Raymond Byabazaire - 10/01/26 12:38 PM
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Gone
by Michael W. Brown - 09/30/26 07:17 PM
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Mara Cole
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/30/26 01:32 PM
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Joined: Nov 2003
Posts: 6,403
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Umm, sweet, Beth. Ol' Cookie got de-floured, did she? (Sorry. Couldn't resist.)
This sings real well, and yes, I think the thought is complete. Only nit I have is one line in the chorus--"There'll be nothing left of Cookie"--has too many syllables. (Ooo, that sounds like heresy. I better re-phrase it. Let's say... It has more syllables than all the other lines, which are nice and consistent.)
How about "Not much left of Cookie" instead? That carries on the thought, and coupled with the lines fore and aft, it does sound like it makes sense, even though it doesn't do so separately.
A nice waltz. Could use a lead tuba, though.
joe
Last edited by Joe Wrabek; 05/14/09 01:23 AM.
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"Cookie" Rev. 5/19 again -- Changes in GREEN
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05/14/09 05:06 AM
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Re: "Cookie" (Oh, WYMAN!.....) -- REVISED 5/14
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