Not to worry, Beth. Borrowing is what them lines was for.

I like it better. I worry about the "Though not a brunette, she opened a store" line. Will people catch the Pussy Galore connection? And (this is probably just a personal preference) I still prefer "bun in the oven" to "bunny in the oven." "Bunny in the oven" is going to get the Bambi-lovers all upset, even if they do recognize it as a diminutive. (We already shoot Bambi. Now we're gonna cook Thumper. You know poor Flower is next. Hmm. Might be a song in that...)

Joe