Hey Joice and Calvin:

I really like this. It's a great hook delivered nicely and the melody is very cool.

I can get behind the lyric too - except for maybe one spot. "What matters are the things that didn't last". It's a great and original line but it seems at odds with the hope that the singer has that something will happen here - because if she wants it to matter than she would want to hope it didn't last.

I'm sure I'm over-thinking this - I know what you're really trying to get across there....and it doesn't seem to bother anyone else...

So I spent all this time talking about one line I'm not sure about. Everything else was fab for me!

Scott

Last edited by Scott Campbell; 05/20/09 09:21 PM.