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SHINE
by Rob B. - 08/20/26 02:34 PM
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Joined: Jun 2009
Posts: 184
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Hi Jan,
Wow I really like the story in this one. I believe couples who have been married for many years can be a wealth of help to young couples. The only lines that didn't sound smoothly enough to me is:
When we’re hammered by the sudden storms of life
How do we get through the thunderous lightning strikes
I agree with the thought conveyed here and the imagery is great but maybe there is another way to massage it, or I could be way off.
BTW,I finally had time to join and I posted the outcome of your time and efforts on My Own Love Story. I hope you think it was worthwhile.
Thank you again,
Skip
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