Stan, the man!! Always good to hear from you. As usual, you make some good points and suggestions. Our respective head tunes seem to dictate that we keep the extra verbiage and syllable counts as we have them, but it won't be the first time that, once a composer gets a hold of it, some of your edits may very well be employed. Guess we'll have to wait and see on that.

I'm thrilled that you like this one over all, though. Jan comes up with great song ideas. I'm just fortunate enough to be able to throw a few verbs and nouns into the mix and see if a song comes out of it.

Thanks for being a longtime JPF friend and supporter!

Greg

If you don't eat your meat, you can't have any pudding.