I like this because I get to say that I think this is two lines from perfect

Most everyday they see us hand in hand
And it’s sort of hard to understand

I suggest you get rid of these two lines
When we’re hammered by the sudden storms of life
How do we get through the thunderous lightning strikes


and move directly into this nugget of a couplet.

They wondered how to keep their wedded bliss
Was there a bigger picture they’d somehow failed to miss


If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop