HiDee Mich-Sis & Bro Greg!

FINE Concept, GREAT Hook! Many a Loveable Line!

It's prolly the Pop Writer in Me, but I yearn for shorter/simpler Verse Lines here..Somehow.

"We were used to hearing all their heated spats/
Said they needed good advice on getting past all that"
Hmmmm....
Maybe: "We'd just heard them having Another Fight/
NOW here-they-were, hoping WE'd help make-things-right"

It's prolly Just Me again, but I'd steer shy of the phrase "wedded bliss". Unless I was bein'-sarcastic. It's never heard conversationally, UNLESS it's in-sarcasm. Or in Poetry.

"Money, Kids (Delete-and), Jobs..to name a few/
But as the lights went out, (Delete-the) anger left our hearts/
When (delete-the) morning came-again, we'd make another start"

Your "Life gets all tangled up" Couplet's a GEM! Ditto for Your BRIDGE--What a GREAT ENDING!!! KUDOS..K-O-Sweepos...& Good Luck with a FINE bitta Writing & Plotline Gang!

Big Hugs,
BB Stan