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Hi Tom

Great advice and suggestions given here. just perfect.

I'm a huge user of sound-alikes and internal rhyming with perfect & sound a-likes.
I let melody and feel of the song HEAVLY dictate the words I choose.

Rather than give you a page of info I can point it out to you by example.
The song we are working on.....

Remember when I used the word " movie" ? to go with magazine.
It worked and no one could predict it.

When I use to have cable I would watch the current video channels alot. This is how I would know all the current hit songs.
I would often play this game while watching and got my wife to play some as well.
We would sit and as fast as we could try to guess the rhyme the song was gonna have next. So both of us would shout out a word before the singer sang it.