Janice, I don't get around to critiquing nearly as much as I'd like, but I have to say this is my absolute favorite lyric of yours. I know it's probably been said before, but so has "I love you", and I keep repeating that old saw all the time, for good reason. Excellent, excellent lyric.

I'm admittedly lousy at making suggestions for modern country music...my instincts always run in more alt-country directions, if not outright nostalgia, but this definitely works for the song.

Good luck with this one!

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