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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: May 2010
Posts: 4,172 Likes: 8
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Kevin,
I liked the song, but agree that there are rushed lines in there, I'm just addressing singing issues, which is difficult without singing it.
These lines need trimmed:
I would get my heart's desire in that toy store window
I said "God, I know you're near, please tell Santa
I was good this year, and can you ask him for me please ...
I think you should try singing this line differently instead of sitting on "do"....and if you....do this...for me
and if you do this for me
This maybe can be sung: and spent the week fixing, painting (then pause) making it look sleek...
and we spent the week fixing,
painting, making it look sleek
Don't know if that makes sense, hard to type out what sings in my head...
Tammy
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