Hello,
I have not tried a lyric feedback yet and I feel that I should just to make any minor changes before I finish this song. Please take a look and if you have any thoughts I would be greatful!
Ricky

"I WISH"

WHEN I SEE YOU
IM PARILIZED
BUT YOUR THE ONE WHO CANT MOVE
SUDDENLY YOUR OPEN EYES
DONT SEE WHAT THEY WANT TO
STOP LOOKING
YOUR HEARTS BLIND
TO THE PAIN INFLICTED EVERY TIME
I SEE FEAR IN BLACK EYES
OH IT HURTS ME INSIDE

CHORUS
AND I WISH YOU HAD IT MADE
NO MORE TEARS OR FEELING SHAME
SPREAD YOUR WINGS SO YOU CAN
FLY AWAY AND NOT COME BACK
ALONE NOW
BUT YOU NEED HIM NOW
ONE DAY SOMEHOW
I WISH I COULD TELL YOU
I WISH I COULD TELL YOU
I WISH I COULD TELL YOU WHAT YOU NEED TO HEAR

NO REGRETS
NOT THIS TIME
GRAB YOUR LIFE AND JUST MOVE ON
HELPLESS YOU TRY
TO TAME MENTAL SUICIDE
START BREATHING
STOP DROWNING
THIS CHANGE WILL ONLY SAVE YOU
I SEE FEAR IN BLACK EYES
AND IT HURTS ME INSIDE

CHORUS

(ENDING AFTER CHORUS)

...NOTHINGS CHANGED
HES THE SAME
NOTHINGS CHANGED
EVERYTHINGS THE SAME

Last edited by Ricky Layne; 05/01/11 05:02 PM.