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TV Drama
by Raymond Byabazaire - 10/15/26 04:35 AM
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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/15/26 02:10 AM
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Lau Noah
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/13/26 02:43 PM
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ILLIT
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/13/26 11:28 AM
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Joined: May 2009
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Hey Kristi, Suggestions below, keep or sweep:)
A slight (adjective--summer?)breeze Brushes through your hair And as we walk togetherLove shuffles through the air
Your (adjective) brown eyes Are sweet on me And as we talk We share some stories ( not considered good craft to rhyme unaccented syllables [-ries] with accented [me]. A one-syllable end rhyme usually falls on the beat
[ch] There’s an ebb and flow That’s so natural
The warm (adjective) sand Wraps around our feet Our (adjective) hearts keep A fast and steady beat
The full (adjective) moon Draws us in close Only You and I are What matters most
[br] Special Moments come and go too soon So we take our time under beneath the brilliant moon And as the tide comes rolling in
“I usually start with a title or maybe a little rhyme or phrase.” - Harlan Howard
Co-writing = Compromise!
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