Hi Jen,

Nice to see you. I haven’t worked out a melody for this yet, so with all the feedback I’ve gotten, I will see what works as far as flow. Hey, thanks for the bridge suggestion, it certainly fits. I had a metaphor in my mind with “as the tide comes in” and welcoming the wind etc…so I have to think about what I actually want to say there!

Thanks for your thoughtful suggestions! Much appreciated!

Kristi


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if he is to be ultimately at peace with himself. What a man can be,
he must be. -- Abraham Maslow, American Psychologist