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Hi Kristi,
I think that this is very lovely, with such a peaceful feel to it!
One thought...in the bridge, when you bring up the Carolina wind...to me, that line gives the couple the east coast geographic location -- but it didn't seem to add much else to the piece. I was thinking that since it's about a Midnight Duet...should some music-related image be brought in? Something about the wind singing to them or something?
Thanks,
Lisa
Last edited by Lisa Gundling; 10/11/11 11:58 AM.
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