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Hi Kristi, You have a nice start here! I think the verses need to flow a bit better as I kept stumbling and losing the rhythm as I read...but that could be just me. As for your bridge, I like it. If you would like to mention some music to go along with the theme of the piece you could say And as the Carolina tide comes in We hear music playing in the wind Overall, nicely done! I'm glad to see you back on the boards again. 
Jennifer (Jinx) Shaner
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