Hi Michael,

Not nit-picky...details are important! : ) Yeah, mentioning "skin" in the bridge would maybe make it more interesting...I was going for a metaphor there with the wind and tide coming in. I am still pondering "brilliant moon"...it's hard to find a good word to put in front of moon! Thanks for the look over!

Kristi


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