Originally Posted by R. Shayne Vaughan
Hey Michael,
Nice little hometown tune you got for this one. Just a few lyric tweaks below, keep or sweep smile


I listened to it underneath my pillow
and all my friends would sing me all night long

Oh I loved to tune it in to places far away (seems to fit meter better)

But then one day I lost my magic radio


Hi Shayne,

Actually I figured out the "best" way, on the demo! I believe I sing, "Oh I loved to tune it in to far 'way places" ...and I didn't think to write it verbatim, from the recording, LOL...

I liked your change, "but" for "oh",,,done...thanks!

See you 'round...

Mike


Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice

-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon)
from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)