Hi,

Nice story.
Regarding how Old Dog Walker comes across as comfusing or not...
maybe a little confusing but when sung seems like it could work as is with the right phrasing on the word Walker, Old Dog Walker although Chris has a nice idea also about (old PAL walker)

I also like the idea of Walker just stepping off into the water and it's goodby


Calvin


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