Like Your latest version...(Which still has One "Walker" to be edited-out..heh!)

"The old dog jumped-in then disappeared" I'll Sug..and
maybe adding a "Then" as a prefix to Your Last Line. KOS!

Very-Touching Story...Good Luck with it!

Best Wishes, Big Hugs, & a Wee FHS,
Stan

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