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TV Drama
by Raymond Byabazaire - 10/15/26 04:35 AM
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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/15/26 02:10 AM
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Lau Noah
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/13/26 02:43 PM
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Hey Nelson,
Beautiful tune mate.
Nits and crits ?
To me, it needs cuts in the musical arrangement where there is too much happening under the vocal melody line.
Solution ? Do that old Nashville thing where the instrumentation just comes in now and again in a voice/musical response kinda way. Keep simple chord backing, and use those counter melodies to play off / bounce off the main vocal line.
This would be a magical song to arrange. It has so many possibilities.
Good luck with it.
cheers, niteshift
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