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by Gary E. Andrews - 07/24/26 08:58 PM
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Hey Nelson,
Beautiful tune mate.
Nits and crits ?
To me, it needs cuts in the musical arrangement where there is too much happening under the vocal melody line.
Solution ? Do that old Nashville thing where the instrumentation just comes in now and again in a voice/musical response kinda way. Keep simple chord backing, and use those counter melodies to play off / bounce off the main vocal line.
This would be a magical song to arrange. It has so many possibilities.
Good luck with it.
cheers, niteshift Oops... Sorry I'm so late responding. I appreciate the input on the arrangement. I was going for some sort of mix of current day and classical era sound. (1700 - 1800s) I've been reading up on Bach's use of counterpoint melodies but of course he had the good fortune of not having a wanna be singer screaming all over his compositions.  Again_thank you much for stopping by
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