This is so beautiful. I do agree with Vic on the idea of all the instruments..perhaps in some place it would stand out more to take some of it out...and build back and forth perhaps and as far as the lyrics, that were mentioned by Little Stevie
I can feel the warmth from a firefly;
hear its sweet song on the wind.--perhaps since a Firefly does not make a noise...maybe something like watch its light, dance on the wind ? but then again poetic songs often do not always logically make sense on every line...and still work..

You sound awesome in this as always and the lyric except for that one line, is breathtaking to me...very deep and well done

Kimberly

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