Very nicely written and vocalised, Nelson.
Reminded me of "Mr Piano Man".

Just one sugg from me, if I may.
I thought it may sound better (to my ears) if there was less going on music wise. To me it was a bit like the instruments were competing with each other. Just my opinion though and you may be aiming at that effect so just ignore me. :-)

Vic


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