Originally Posted by Vicarn
Very nicely written and vocalised, Nelson.
Reminded me of "Mr Piano Man".

Just one sugg from me, if I may.
I thought it may sound better (to my ears) if there was less going on music wise. To me it was a bit like the instruments were competing with each other. Just my opinion though and you may be aiming at that effect so just ignore me. :-)

Vic


Vic and Kim
I hear you loud and clear on the instruments and hope to get it all smooth out and squared away eventually.

Thanks for stopping by