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A test
by bennash - 05/26/26 07:18 AM
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Rob
by Rob B. - 05/25/26 11:14 PM
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Love the hook Dom but in execution you do betray the fact you are not married
IMO your examples do a disservice to that excellent hook...the very first reaction by Elvis showed you that
Maybe rewrite on the basis of dumb but intimate things...you ate the cake she baked for her mom....one suggestion
Anyway, stellar hook...
If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop
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