Hi Bobbie

You're just a fountain of lyrics lately.

I always read lyrics and create virtual reality scenes in my mind as I try to sing along to an imaginary musical flow. Sometimes I can go on quite a trip without ever leaving the farm so to speak.
I beg your forgiveness in light of the current world situation but this reads just like a 50's/60's soldier gone to war song and I even imagined the harmony styles that were used then. Just me you know. God I still listen to some good old Frankie Valli stuff.
I love the loyalty and strength in the picture painted at the end of this lyric.
One thing I'll mention is I have to agree with Blake on the finger snap thing but he's right, where do you go with that?

The other thing is I couldn't get a rythum going for is the threepeat of the hook in the chorus.......But you've got something in mind for that I know.
Nice classic American style story and as warm and familiar as Mom's home made apple pie.

JMHO as you know. Don't forget to pat your Dawg!

Eric

If you're going to judge someone, do it on the side of mercy.