Snake, here are some tweaks of the lyric. I think you should keep it about Daisy, and about the singer himself. Keep or sweep. I hope you don't mind. It still needs a hook/title. 'Daisy Dances' seems to be the theme and could be a refrain-type chorus ending each verse, an old world, folkish style, with a danceable, percussive guitar rhythm and/or riff.

Daisy dances, she turns and spins above the floor
Crying strings inspire her flight
Leaving ME to wish for a little more
(My guitar plays on a Saturday night)
Daisy Dances. (Rhythmic/percussive piece here)

Daisy cares, her heart as wide as open sky
Gives and shares from deep within
She spreads her wings as I watch her feet fly
She helps ME forget where IT IS we've been
Daisy Dances.

Daisy dances, spins and turns 'til it's all too much.
NO ONE ELSE CAN comprehend
SHE fills a PLACE inside ME with her touch
Until my guitar rounds up to the end.
Daisy Dances.

Daisy comes to dance a Nashville night away
Her arms welcome everyone
Her eyes meet mine and she bids me to play
Daisy dances, into the morning sun
Daisy Dances.

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