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Hiya Samorama! Ok...I have to say I LOVE the re-write. I'm stumblin' on the word "negativity"...just doesn't seem to flow like the rest does. Or maybe it's just that I have a hard time gettin' it to sing for me...could just be me. Maybe "Daisy comes to chase all the gloom away" or "Daisy comes to chase the rejection away" or....lol I could go on, ya know...but ya get my point.  can't wait to hear it with a tune....in my head it sings rather upbeat. Bree
The ideal poet has a genius for making the things we see every day seem new. ~ Samuel Johnson I write because I breathe, I breathe because I write. ~ Me www.soundclick.com/breeg
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