Hiya Samorama!

Ok...I have to say I LOVE the re-write.

I'm stumblin' on the word "negativity"...just doesn't seem to flow like the rest does. Or maybe it's just that I have a hard time gettin' it to sing for me...could just be me. Maybe
"Daisy comes to chase all the gloom away"
or
"Daisy comes to chase the rejection away"
or....lol
I could go on, ya know...but ya get my point.

grin
can't wait to hear it with a tune....in my head it sings rather upbeat.

Bree


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