Originally Posted by Bobbie Gallup
Howdy Snake,

I think everyone in the room was wondering what was going on when you and the Sandwich Fairies came into Lyrix...but the story of what you all do was so special, we were all entranced. Thank you for all you and they do to help the street people.

I think you are well on your way with this one. My biggest question would be that this is written/sung from the perspective of a street person. That would make it hard to pitch to an artist if that is your hope. If not...then just skip that comment. I hope Daisy keeps on Dancing!

Hugs,
Bobbie


Damn, people....this is the most positive set of crits that I think I have ever seen.....I will also make sure that Daisy sees this, too.....

THANK YOU!!!!!!

I didn't think about anyone that I wanted to pitch this one to, I just wanted to write one for my friend....
It isn't from the perspective of a street person, it's from her admirer, wherever he may be....

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